Water on the Line

It’s a question crime writers are often asked: ‘How would you feel if the deaths in your book came true?’ Thriller writer Max Kinnings recently found the events of his latest book coming all too true…

When I saw the news earlier this month that part of the Central Line on the London Underground had been flooded, I took to Twitter to say: “Didn’t realise the Central Line had flooded today. Bloody reality trying to steal part of my storyline.” I was referring – albeit flippantly – to my new novel, Baptism, in which Christian fundamentalist terrorists hijack a London tube train and breach an underground river in order to flood a section of the Northern Line. It’s a high concept plot device that hopefully makes for a terrifying and above all plausible scenario for a thriller.

But until it happened, I didn’t realise quite how plausible the scenario might be. Although the river in the novel is a fictitious one, there are a number of underground tributaries in London such as the Walbrook, Fleet, Effra and Tyburn. There is also an intricate labyrinth of sewers and water mains of various sizes and states of repair that weave in and around the tube network. The Central Line flooding is not the first and will, unfortunately, probably not be the last such incident. Since the 1960s, water levels have been rising in London due to a number of factors, such as the inexorable rise in sea levels generally, and more specifically the closure of industries that in the past had extracted huge volumes of water for processing, cleaning and cooling purposes. Prior to the building of the Thames Barrier in 1986, many tube tunnels were fitted with floodgates to protect stations in the event of the Thames breaking its banks and they are still maintained in the event of flooding caused by heavy rain or other factors today.

Entering an underground environment, especially one so vast and intricate as the Tube, plays on our darkest fears. It’s not just flooding that might give the Tube traveller pause to think about their mode of transport. The London Underground has also played host to murders, fires, crashes and most recently – and most terrifying of all – terrorist attacks. In 2005, I happened to find myself in the tube train behind the one in which Jean Charles de Menezes was tragically killed by armed police who mistook him for a terrorist. Trapped in the tunnel for nearly an hour, I witnessed the unravelling of tube passengers’ carefully constructed social façades. It was a frightening experience but one that, as a writer, I knew I could use.

The London Underground is a place that evokes polarised views and opinions. Some love its ease of use and quaint architecture; to others, it is a place that makes them feel nervous, dislocated and claustrophobic, locked in some of the deepest and narrowest underground railway lines ever built. It is this fear and discomfort that I wanted to play upon when I wrote Baptism. Readers of thrillers want to be scared and in that regard, I don’t think I’ve held back. I just didn’t realise how close to reality the events of the book might become.

www.maxkinnings.com 

An accidental crime writer

Many crime writers never set out to write in the genre, they just find themselves there, drawn by the strong plots and exciting situations. Lesley Cookman tells us how she ended up there, after a career in magazines. 


After a 30 year career of scrabbling around in the dust of the magazine publishing industry. writing for publications like Business Matters and Which Computer, in between raising four children and a variety of cats, I finally morphed into a crime writer. My favourite reading since the age of nine, when my parents let me loose on their bookshelves, I was inspired by the likes of Ngaio Marsh, Margery Allingham, Dorothy L Sayers, John Dickson Carr and Carter Dickson (the same person, in case you didn’t know). I wasn’t a great fan of the American series except Rex Stout, and of course, JDC/CD was an American, although he wrote mainly British stories with British detectives.

I didn’t even fantasise about writing a mystery series, I just loved them. I wrote all sorts of other things, including a couple of category style romances in the eighties, short stories for the women’s magazines and many, many pantomimes. And yes, they’re published, too.

But I began to think about a series, realising that in the US there was still a flourishing market for “cosy” crime. I wrote 20,000 words of a mystery as my dissertation for a Master’s degree in Creative Writing in 2003, and in 2005, someone who’d seen it asked if I’d written any more. I hadn’t, but added a couple of thousand words and sent it off. And that was the first Libby Sarjeant mystery, published in May 2006.

Subsequently, there have been nine more, with Murder By Magic coming out this month, June 2012, and to celebrate Libby’s tenth Jubilee, all the backlist have been re-issued with new covers to match. The series relies heavily on the characters, and my special delight is when readers tell me they look forward to a new book to “meet old friends”. However, I always try to bring in a social or topical issue to alleviate the “fluff”, and usually this will be a factor in the murder or murders.

If you, dear reader, wish to try your hand at this sort of book, which the publishing industry will tell you would NEVER sell, just take heart from me, Hazel Holt, Veronica Heley, Simon Brett, Rebecca Tope, Catherine Aird and Amy Myers, to name but a few. Strangely, our books are still selling, and to prove it, I’ve been contracted for three more. OK, we’re never going to fly to the top of the bestseller lists (although I didn’t do too badly in the Amazon download charts for a few days!) but we are still being bought, borrowed and read by a substantial section of the reading public. Go on, go for it!

http://www.lesleycookman.co.uk/ Lesley’s latest novel is Murder by Magic, available at the moment on Kindle for the bargain price of 77p! 

What makes a good crime novel?

Pauline Rowson is a thriller writer and the author of the DI Horton series of crime novels set in the Solent area on the South Coast of England. Here she talks us through what makes a crime novel work. 

Ask this question of crime fiction fans and you’ll get varied answers.  Some like the gritty gruesome, others prefer cozy comfortable.  Some enjoy a literary style crime novel, others a racy, action-packed page turner. Reading about exotic locations can turn some readers on whilst others enjoy ‘home spun’ tales. Then there’s historical or contemporary, detective or private eye, male protagonist or female… But all crime fiction fans will agree they want great, believable characters and a cracking good plot. Saying this is easy, writing and delivering it time and time again is much more difficult.  But then that’s the challenge and the enjoyment of writing.

Creating and developing a complex main character that the reader can have empathy with is, of course, vitally important.  The reader must want to trust this character, feel his/her pain and disappointments, and root for him/her throughout the novel.  And it’s not just the main character but the supporting cast, the villains and the walk-ons who all need characteristics that are believable even if they are eccentric. The cast must be real to the writer and therefore real to the reader.

We also know that the plot needs to have twists and turns which will surprise the reader. But the plot and surprises spring from the characters’ actions and motivations so we’re back once more to creating great characters.

Writing a crime novel also takes fantastic organisational skills because all the bits of the plot and sub plots need to add up.  If you change one thing on revisions then you find you have to change everything.

And all this takes hard work, which is what I should be doing now. But before I get back to Inspector Andy Horton and his crew in the latest marine mystery crime novel here’s a final note. In addition to the above the crime novel must also be well-written, have memorable settings, a mixture of narrative and realistic dialogue and a central theme.  Being a crime writer is not easy, never dull, but we love it. Why else would we do it?

For further information visit Pauline’s official website www.rowmark.co.uk You can also follow her on Twitter http://twitter.com/PaulineRowson Or visit her Marine Mystery Facebook Page    

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UK fire-fighters are dying long after they’ve reached the safety of cold daylight from the burning darkness of a blaze. Why? Marine artist Adam Greene is left to find out when his best friend, fire fighter Jack Bartholomew, is killed in a fire. Was it an accident or arson? Adam attends the funeral ready to mourn when another funeral intrudes upon his thoughts, and one he has tried very hard to forget for the last fifteen years. But before he has time to digest this, or discover the identity of the stranger stalking him, Jack’s house is ransacked. Unaware of the risks he is running Adam soon finds himself caught up in a mysterious and dangerous web of deceit. By exposing a secret that has lain dormant for years Adam is forced to face his own dark secrets, and as the facts reveal themselves the prospects for his survival look bleak. But Adam knows there is no turning back; he has to get to the truth no matter what the cost, even if it means his life.


 

Second Readings

He may spend a lot of time poring over new crime fiction for newspapers and magazines, but Barry Forshaw (whose latest book is a guide to Scandinavian crime fiction, Death in Cold Climate, and whose next book is British Crime Film) makes a point of dusting off some favourites in the few gaps that appear in his reading regime. Here he talks us through a few classics we may have missed. 


The Murder Room

P D James

The doughty Inspector Adam Dalgliesh finds himself in a private museum on Hampstead Heath. One of the family trustees has been brutally murdered and the future of the museum is up for grabs. As so often with Holland Park’s most venerable novelist, the handling of violent death in a closed-off setting is consummately handled and The Murder Room is vintage PD James.

The Mask of Dimitrios

Eric Ambler

Eric Ambler’s most famous book gets better with the years: The crime novelist Latimer hears about the evil Dimitrios in Istanbul when looking at the latter’s dead body, freshly retrieved from the Bosphorous. And Latimer makes the mistake of trying to find out the truth about the murdered man. Wonderfully atmospheric, with a narrative that commands from the first page, this is probably the most authoritative of Ambler’s political thrillers.

Dark Hollow

John Connolly

John Connolly’s Every Dead Thing, featuring Detective “Bird” Parker, was a highly unusual entry in the field, written in a quixotic, arresting style. But Dark Hollow is equally unorthodox. Connolly remarked that he wanted to give this book a very sinister feel, rather than just a gruesome one. Bird returns to the wintry Maine of his childhood, where a woman and a child are savagely killed. Disturbing and unsettling fare.

The Ministry of Fear

Graham Greene

London in the Blitz is brilliantly conjured by one of the greatest of English writers in this dazzling piece. Greene claimed a contentious division between his ‘entertainments’ and his ‘literary’ work, but the moral issues here are as rigorously handled as anything by Greene in his more ambitious novels. Arthur Rowe, full of guilt after the death of his sick wife, is plunged into a dangerous world of murderous, shadowy figures. Possibly the author’s most sheerly enjoyable novel in the ‘thriller’ vein.


The Naming of the Dead

Ian Rankin

What would British crime fiction do without Ian Rankin? Apart from anything else, it would be somewhat lopsided in terms of the sexes, as there are markedly more Queens of Crime than Kings. And of the latter, Rankin is undoubtedly the ruling monarch, as The Naming of the Dead reminds us. Rankin was inspired by a variety of media scare stories about the G8 meeting of world leaders in Scotland in 2005, and perceived that this would make the perfect background for one of his novels.

What happens at Crimefest… part 2

We continue with the feedback and reports from the crime convention that kicked off Crime Writing Month. Janet O’Kane reports on the panel ‘Mad, Bad, and Dangerous to Know’, moderated by Donna Moore, with panellists Helen Fitzgerald, Douglas Lindsay, Michael J Malone, and Damien Seaman. 

I’ve often wondered how writers greet the news that their CrimeFest panel moderator will be Donna Moore. Are they jubilant at the prospect of being quizzed by someone who tends to ask the most imaginative and challenging questions of the entire event? Or are they thrown into blind panic, knowing how much ‘homework’ they’ll be set beforehand?

Douglas Lindsay must have known what to expect, having been on Donna’s panel last year which required him to read out a specially written story featuring an animal. You can read the blood-spattered result here: http://www.barney-thomson.com/blog.asp?blogid=4876 . In 2012, Mad, Bad & Dangerous to Know kicked off with each panel member providing the audience with their own alternative biography and the opening of a spoof cosy-crime story. Needless to say, their creations were anything but cosy, and who would have guessed that Michael is the estranged love-child of Alex Salmond and Dame Edna Everage? After that, making an elevator pitch for their latest novels must have been a doddle.

Michael and Damien spoke about the joy and challenges of being first-time published novelists. Michael wrote his book, Blood Tears, then discovered another Michael Malone wrote in the same genre. Not just that, one of his books featured the same MO and the man himself ‘looks like he could be my dad’. As a result, Michael had to change both the MO and his name. Damien, whose novel The Killing of Emma Gross is available as an e-book, said he’s ‘having a ball’, but admitted he has a lot to learn. His excitement on spotting he’d jumped several thousand places up the Amazon sales chart was short-lived, when his publisher Blasted Heath pointed out this was because he’d sold five books.

Asked why they were attracted to writing crime, the panel came up with a wide variety of reasons. Helen reckoned that by killing people in her imagination, things don’t seem so bad in real life. Her books are often hard to categorise – the most recent, The Donor, centres around a father’s terrible choice concerning his daughters – but ‘I always kill someone’. For Douglas, whose most recent novel, The Unburied Dead, is a departure from his Barney Thomson series, it felt ‘the natural thing to do’. Somewhat bravely, Damien said he isn’t especially fond of reading crime, finding it ‘depressing’, but is a big fan of films like Pulp Fiction and Fargo. For Michael, writing crime was a ‘happy accident’. He was already a published poet and had written two novels which had gone nowhere when he dreamt about a killer who did a curious thing, cutting his own eyelid so he appeared to be crying blood. When he woke up he knew he ‘just had to use’ this.

Kicking off a discussion about real-life influences on their writing, Damien related how a trip to Berlin renewed his interest in history, which he had studied at university. It was there he sought out the story of a serial killer on which to base his book. Michael stayed closer to home for his novel, setting it in Glasgow and involving events in a Catholic orphanage. He has personal experience of such an institution, and although he didn’t intend writing Blood Tears to be cathartic, it turned out to be. He is now trying to avoid sending a copy to his aunt who, at 84, is both an avid reader and a nun.

Helen saw no reason to deny that her work is heavily influenced by her own circumstances, saying ‘you write about what’s going on in your life’. She has two children, and families feature often in her books. Having a 15-year-old partly explains why she writes for young adults as well, although she also considers that her writing style suits this age group.Douglasinsists he ‘just charges in’ and writes, mixing up death and comedy. However, he was seriously affected by the killing of someone he knew, and didn’t write any murders for about four years as a result.

This wide-ranging panel went on to discuss topics like the responsibility a writer has to the reader, how they approach research, and what they are currently working on. Fans of Barney Thomson were disappointed to hear that Douglas has no immediate plan to bring that character back, while Michael is hoping he’ll be able to fob off his aunt, the nun, with his upcoming non-fiction book on modern-day, successful Scots. Crafty as ever, Donna also asked the writers to own up to the worst reviews their work has received, than read out some she had researched herself. Helen particularly remembered one of her books being dismissed with ‘The only good thing is it’s mercifully short’. Finally, each author was asked which of ‘mad, bad or dangerous to know’ they were. Douglas refused to answer, claiming to be ‘offended I was even put on this panel’.

This was an entertaining panel that benefited from bringing together an eclectic mix of authors under the direction of a well-informed and imaginative moderator.

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